Writing Romantic Comedy: Capturing Humor, Heart, and Heat in The Big Time

Romantic comedy is one of the most beloved genres in storytelling, offering the perfect blend of humor and heart. It’s a space where readers can laugh, feel all the feels, and fall in love with characters who navigate the messy world of romance. When writing my novel The Big Time, I wanted to tap into that blend—flawed characters, witty dialogue, and those unforgettable moments of vulnerability. And sometimes, that means letting your character sing a ridiculous song about bananas!

1. Create Relatable, Flawed Characters

The heart of any romantic comedy lies in characters who are flawed and relatable—people we can laugh at, cry with, and cheer on. Chris Reynolds, the protagonist of The Big Time, is a struggling actor trying to make it in Hollywood. He’s been rejected from countless auditions, and after turning down a role in a porn film, he’s on the verge of moving back home. That’s when his ex, Jett Sumner, a musician on the rise, reappears in his life.

Chris’s situation is one that many of us can relate to—the fear of failure, the struggle to make it in a tough industry, and the uncertainty of what the future holds. This is what makes Chris so endearing, despite his setbacks. We’ve all felt like we’re one step away from packing it all in.

Writing Tip: Don’t be afraid to let your characters be imperfect. Their flaws make them relatable and provide a natural space for growth over the course of the story.

2. Infuse Humor in Dialogue—and Situations!

Romantic comedies thrive on humor, and it doesn’t always have to come from witty banter—sometimes, it’s situational. One of my favorite moments in The Big Time is when Chris auditions for a role and is asked to perform a ridiculous, off-the-wall number called The Banana Song. Picture this: Chris, at the end of his rope, is handed a giant stuffed banana and has to belt out a silly tune about bananas while holding it. It’s absurd, funny, and yet, it’s exactly the kind of thing that happens in the entertainment industry.

Writing Tip: Situational humor can add depth to your characters and lighten the mood, even when things are tough. Don’t be afraid to get a little silly—it keeps the story fun!

3. Play With Timing and Tension

Timing is everything in romantic comedies—both in the humor and in the love story. In The Big Time, Chris and Jett reconnect at a time when both are focused on their careers. Chris is barely holding things together in Hollywood, while Jett is about to hit the big time as a musician. Their chemistry is undeniable, but the timing couldn’t be worse. Chris is desperate to rebuild his life, and Jett can’t afford distractions.

The tension comes from watching two people who clearly belong together try to navigate their ambitions while fighting off old feelings. Will they manage a fling, or will their hearts force them to admit that they’ve always been meant for more?

Writing Tip: Timing is a powerful tool in romantic comedy. Let the tension between what the characters want and what they need build throughout the story. It will keep readers hooked!

4. Mix Humor With Emotional Vulnerability

While humor is essential, the real heart of a romantic comedy lies in emotional depth. In The Big Time, Chris and Jett’s connection isn’t just built on their electric chemistry or their funny moments together. Underneath it all is the pain of their first breakup, unresolved feelings, and the question of whether they can move past old wounds to find happiness together.

For example, Chris’s fear of failure in Hollywood is paralleled by his fear of failure in love. As much as he tries to keep things casual with Jett, deep down, he knows that Jett is the one person who could truly break his heart again.

Writing Tip: Emotional vulnerability gives your romantic comedy substance. It’s those moments of raw honesty that make the love story meaningful.

5. End With a Satisfying Payoff

No romantic comedy is complete without a happily-ever-after that leaves readers smiling. After all the chaos—bananas included—Chris and Jett have to confront their real feelings for each other and make a decision about their future. The ups and downs of their relationship culminate in a heartfelt resolution, where both characters are not only together, but stronger for having faced their fears and insecurities.

Writing Tip: Give your characters the ending they’ve earned. A romantic comedy should leave readers feeling uplifted and satisfied, knowing that love—and a little laughter—conquered all.


Writing romantic comedy is all about balancing humor with heart. The Big Time was an absolute blast to create, from the playful moments like Chris’s banana-filled audition, to the emotional journey that he and Jett embark on together. If you’re writing your own rom-com, remember: it’s the blend of laughter and vulnerability that makes the genre so irresistible! The Big Time is available at all major online retailers, including Amazon, Apple Books, Google Play, Kobo, Nook, and Smashwords.

How to Craft Unforgettable Characters in Romance: Going Beyond the Tropes

In the world of romance, tropes are like comfort food: they’re familiar, and they’re what readers come back for time and again. Whether it’s enemies-to-lovers, friends-to-lovers, or forbidden romance, these beloved plot devices give the genre its recognizable heart. But if you’re looking to write characters that linger in the reader’s mind long after they’ve closed the book, it’s essential to go beyond the tropes and dig deeper into what makes your characters tick.

Take Father Matteo from Confessions: Justin’s Penance as an example. He might fit the mold of the “forbidden love” trope, as a priest who struggles with his attraction to a student. But Matteo’s character stands out because of the emotional depth, vulnerability, and complexity of his journey. Rather than just relying on the scandalous nature of the trope, his internal conflict — a push-and-pull between his faith and his desires — makes him more than just a vehicle for the plot. He becomes someone readers can empathize with, no matter their background.

Here’s how you can craft unforgettable characters in your own romance stories:

1. Start with the Trope, But Don’t Stop There

Tropes are useful because they give you a framework to build your story around. But remember, tropes shouldn’t define your characters; they should guide them. For example, in the forbidden love trope, it’s easy to fall into a pattern of “Priest falls for a student, moral dilemma ensues.” However, Matteo’s backstory — growing up in El Salvador, struggling with his faith from a young age, and having a personal connection to his parish — gives his conflict more weight. We’re not just watching a man resist temptation; we’re seeing someone grapple with his spiritual identity, upbringing, and sense of self-worth.

Tip: Ask yourself what more you can add to the trope. What aspects of your character’s past, their personality, or their environment make their experience with the trope unique?

2. Give Your Characters Internal Conflicts

What makes a character truly memorable is their internal journey. External conflicts are important, but it’s the characters’ inner battles that resonate with readers on a deeper level. Father Matteo’s struggle with guilt, shame, and faith is what drives his decisions and reactions. He’s not just tempted by desire; he’s haunted by his inability to reconcile his role as a priest with his humanity.

Tip: Think about what your character wants vs. what they need. Matteo wants to be a good priest, to serve the Church, and to uphold his vow of celibacy. But what he needs is redemption, forgiveness, and a sense of peace with his human nature. His internal conflict is what makes him relatable, even if readers can’t personally relate to his specific circumstances.

3. Make Them Vulnerable

Readers connect with characters who are flawed and vulnerable. Perfect heroes or heroines might seem appealing at first glance, but they’re not as compelling as characters who struggle, fail, and face challenges within themselves. Matteo is deeply vulnerable — his guilt over his actions with Justin, his fears about losing his way in the Church, and his doubts about his faith all make him a character readers want to see grow.

Tip: Show your characters’ weaknesses and let them struggle. Vulnerability doesn’t make a character weak; it makes them human. Whether your character is battling their own demons, like Matteo, or struggling to open up to love, those moments of vulnerability are what readers will remember.

4. Develop Their Backstory

A rich backstory can give depth to your characters and explain why they act the way they do. Matteo’s upbringing in a deeply religious household, his history of questioning his faith, and his father-son relationship with Father Rafael all provide context for his internal struggles. Without these layers, Matteo’s moral dilemma might feel shallow. But with them, we understand why he feels so torn and why his decisions are so difficult.

Tip: Spend time fleshing out your character’s backstory. It doesn’t need to be pages of exposition, but knowing where your character comes from will inform how they react to the present. Their fears, desires, and motivations should all stem from their personal history.

5. Allow Growth and Change

Romance is all about the journey. Characters who start in one place emotionally and end in another are the ones who stick with readers. Matteo begins his story trapped in guilt and self-loathing, but he’s seeking redemption and peace. His willingness to consider new paths, like a retreat at Holy Cross Abbey, shows that he’s on a journey toward healing and self-acceptance.

Tip: Show how your characters evolve throughout the story. They don’t have to become completely different people, but growth — even in small ways — can make their arc satisfying. In romance, this often involves the characters finding the courage to love or be loved, but it can also mean reconciling with past mistakes or embracing new opportunities.

6. Focus on Relationships, Not Just Romance

While romance is the core of the story, other relationships in your character’s life can give them depth and context. Father Matteo’s connection with his mother and Father Rafael shows different facets of his personality. These relationships also serve as mirrors for Matteo’s own internal journey. His mother represents his childhood faith and duty, while Rafael represents the possibility of renewal and forgiveness.

Tip: Develop supporting characters who challenge, support, or mirror your main character. These relationships can help highlight your protagonist’s growth and provide more insight into their personality.

Conclusion

Tropes may draw readers in, but unforgettable characters will keep them hooked. By focusing on internal conflict, backstory, vulnerability, and growth, you can create characters who feel real, relatable, and multi-dimensional. Whether you’re writing forbidden love, friends-to-lovers, or any other classic romance setup, what will truly make your story stand out is the depth and authenticity of your characters.

So next time you’re crafting a romance, ask yourself: how can I go beyond the trope to create characters that readers will remember long after the final page?

Happy writing!

Confessions: Justin’s Penance, Lust, and Ecstasy is available at Amazon, Apple Books, Google Play, Kobo, Barnes & Noble, and Smashwords. You can also purchase it from the Cruz Publishing bookstore.

Meet Max Coleman!

Today, we’re sitting down with Maxwell “Max” Coleman, the celebrated food blogger and journalist behind some of the most mouthwatering content on the web. Known for his sharp wit, discerning palate, and passion for culinary exploration, Max has carved out a niche for himself as a voice to be reckoned with in the food world. As he moves into his new loft in RVA’s Shockoe Bottom, we caught up with him to chat about food, life, and everything in between. Maxwell is a main character in the upcoming novel “Electric.”

Q: Welcome, Max! Let’s dive right in—what inspired your passion for food? Max: Thanks for having me! Honestly, food was always a big part of my life growing up. I come from a pretty diverse neighborhood, so I was surrounded by all these incredible flavors and dishes from different cultures. Food became more than just something to eat; it was a way to connect with people and experience their stories. That love for food only grew over time, and now I get to write about it and share those experiences with others. It’s like the best job in the world.

Q: Your blog has taken off in recent years. What do you think sets your approach apart from other food bloggers? Max: I think it’s a mix of things. First, I’m super curious—I love getting into the nitty-gritty of a dish, finding out what makes it tick. It’s not just about how it tastes, but the story behind it, the technique, the creativity. Also, I try to be really supportive of local chefs and restaurants. RVA has an incredible food scene that’s often overlooked, and I love being able to spotlight the talent here.

Q: You recently moved to RVA from Norfolk. What brought you to the River City? Max: RVA just felt like the perfect place for a fresh start. I’ve been through some tough stuff in the last few years, and this city has this amazing energy—creative, a little gritty, but full of heart. Plus, my new videographer lives nearby in Church Hill, and we’re really taking the blog to the next level with her professional touch. It’s an exciting new chapter.

Q: Let’s talk astrology for a second—you’re a Leo. Do you think your zodiac sign influences how you approach life and your work? Max: Oh, 100%. (laughs) Leos are known for being passionate, and that’s definitely me when it comes to food. I throw myself into everything I do, whether it’s trying a new dish or writing a review. Leos are also all about loyalty and shining a light on others, which I like to think I do by supporting local chefs and restaurants. We’re natural leaders, but that can come with a bit of ego too, and I won’t lie—I’ve had my struggles with that.

Q: You’ve mentioned some personal challenges—how have they shaped who you are today? Max: Yeah, I’ve faced some pretty serious stuff. A few years ago, I was injured during a political protest at UVA. That experience left me with physical injuries and emotional trauma that I’m still working through. My passion for food helped pull me out of some dark places—it gave me something to focus on, something positive.

Q: How does your journey influence the content you create? Max: It’s all connected. I think my readers see that I’m not just writing about food for the sake of it. There’s a depth to the work, whether it’s talking about the artistry of a dish or supporting a restaurant that’s struggling. I know what it’s like to have to rebuild, and I feel that same resilience in the food world, especially with local chefs who pour their heart and soul into what they do. I try to bring that authenticity into my work.

Q: What’s next for you? Max: I’m really excited to keep growing the blog with my videographer in Church Hill. We’re pushing out some great content, and I want to dive even deeper into the local food scene here in RVA. Beyond that, I’m focusing on staying healthy and working through my recovery. Life’s a journey, and I’m just taking it one step—and one dish—at a time.

Q: Any last words for your readers? Max: Just keep exploring! Whether it’s a new restaurant or a dish you’ve never tried, food has this incredible power to connect us and help us grow. And to my fellow foodies in RVA and beyond, thanks for sticking with me on this wild ride. There’s a lot more to come!


Max Coleman’s journey from food lover to influential blogger is as complex and layered as the dishes he writes about. We’re thrilled to see where his passion takes him next!

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Writing What You Know: Transforming Personal Experience into Fiction

Meet Jordan Reyes, a character inspired by you know who.

Have you ever read a character in a novel and felt an uncanny connection, as if the author had somehow peered into your own life? Chances are, that character was born from the author’s personal experiences. As a writer, I’ve discovered that some of the most compelling stories emerge when we draw from our own lives, transforming our experiences into fictional narratives that resonate with readers on a profound level.

I’m an author specializing in romance novels, particularly those featuring LGBTQ+ characters. My works include “Ignited,” an MM romance, and my current project, “Breaking The Ice,” a lesbian romance novel. Through my journey as a writer, I’ve come to appreciate the power of infusing my characters with aspects of my own life experiences.

In this post, I’ll explore how authors, including myself, often draw from our own lives to create authentic, multi-dimensional characters. I’ll share insights from my writing process and offer tips on how you can harness your personal experiences to enrich your fiction.

The Value of Personal Experience in Fiction

When we write what we know, we bring an unparalleled level of authenticity to our work. Our personal experiences provide a wellspring of emotions, details, and nuances that can breathe life into our characters and settings. This approach allows us to write with conviction about the thoughts, feelings, and reactions of our characters because we’ve lived them ourselves.

Moreover, drawing from personal experience can add layers of complexity to our characters. We understand the contradictions, the inner conflicts, and the growth that comes from lived experiences. This depth can make our characters more relatable and engaging for readers.

Case Study: “Breaking The Ice”

Let me illustrate this concept with an example from my current work-in-progress, “Breaking The Ice.” This novel tells the story of a congresswoman who falls in love with a political activist named Jordan Reyes. Jordan is a passionate woman working for a non-profit called The People’s Progress Alliance.

Jordan’s character is loosely based on my own experiences as a political activist in the 1990s. During that time, I was deeply involved with organizations such as Clean Water Action, Citizen Action, and The South Carolina Wildlife Federation. I also worked on election campaigns for former Virginia Governor Doug Wilder and former congressional representative Jim Moran.

By basing Jordan on my own experiences, I can imbue her with authentic passion for political causes, a realistic understanding of the challenges faced by activists, and genuine reactions to the political landscape she navigates. These elements of realism can make Jordan a more compelling and believable character for readers.

From Real Life to Fiction: The Transformation Process

Of course, transforming personal experiences into fiction isn’t as simple as transcribing one’s life onto the page. It’s a delicate process of selecting, adapting, and reimagining real events and emotions to serve the story.

When creating Jordan, I didn’t simply replicate my own life story. Instead, I carefully chose specific experiences and traits that would contribute to her character arc and the overall narrative. For instance, I might use the adrenaline rush I felt during a particularly tense protest to describe Jordan’s emotions during a pivotal scene. Or, I might draw on the frustration I experienced when facing political roadblocks to add depth to Jordan’s motivations.

The key is to use these personal experiences as a foundation, then build upon them with imagination and the needs of the story. This way, the character becomes a unique individual, distinct from the author, yet grounded in authentic experiences.

The Benefits and Challenges of Writing from Personal Experience

Drawing from personal experience in your writing comes with both advantages and potential pitfalls. Let’s explore these in more detail.

Benefits:

  1. Emotional Connection: When you write about experiences close to your heart, that emotional resonance often translates to the page. This can create a powerful connection with readers who sense the authenticity in your words.
  2. Rich Details: Personal experiences provide a wealth of specific details that can bring your writing to life. The texture of a protest sign in your hands, the particular shade of the sky on a tense election night – these details add vibrancy to your scenes.
  3. Confidence in Your Voice: Writing about familiar territory can boost your confidence as an author. This assurance often results in more assertive, compelling prose.

Challenges:

  1. Maintaining Objectivity: It can be difficult to separate yourself from your experiences when fictionalizing them. Remember, your character is not you, and their journey may need to diverge from your own for the sake of the story.
  2. Respecting Privacy: When drawing from real-life experiences, especially those involving other people, it’s crucial to consider privacy and potential legal issues. Always change identifying details and consider the impact your writing might have on others.
  3. Balancing Fact and Fiction: It’s easy to get caught up in recreating events exactly as they happened. However, the needs of your story should always come first. Be prepared to alter, combine, or even invent experiences to serve your narrative.

Tips for Writers

If you’re interested in incorporating more of your personal experiences into your fiction, here are some tips to get you started:

  1. Keep a Journal: Regular journaling can help you capture the emotions and details of your experiences while they’re fresh. This can be an invaluable resource when you’re writing.
  2. Practice People-Watching: Observe the world around you with a writer’s eye. How do people interact? What quirks do they have? These observations can help you create more rounded characters.
  3. Mine Your Emotions: Think about times when you felt strong emotions – joy, fear, anger, love. Use these emotional memories to inform your characters’ experiences.
  4. Use the “What If” Technique: Take a real experience and ask, “What if things had gone differently?” This can be a great way to springboard from reality into fiction.
  5. Be Selective: Not every personal experience needs to make it into your writing. Choose the ones that best serve your story and characters.
  6. Seek Feedback: Share your work with trusted readers. They can help you identify where your personal connection to the material enhances the story and where it might be holding you back.

Conclusion

Writing what you know doesn’t mean limiting yourself to strict autobiography. Instead, it’s about using your lived experiences as a springboard for your imagination. By blending personal knowledge with creativity, you can craft stories that feel authentic and resonate deeply with readers.

In my own writing journey, from “Ignited” to “Breaking The Ice,” I’ve found that drawing from my experiences as an activist has allowed me to create characters with depth, passion, and believability. It’s given me a unique voice and perspective that I can share with my readers.

Remember, every experience you have is potential material for your writing. The key is learning how to transform those experiences into compelling fiction. So, the next time you sit down to write, consider mining your own life for inspiration. You might be surprised at the stories you find waiting to be told.

Breaking The Ice

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Embracing the Tropes: How I Rescued My Writing Business and Found Joy in Trope-Driven Romance

In 2020, the world was in turmoil. The U.S. election was one of the most contentious in history, and the pandemic added a layer of uncertainty to almost every aspect of life. My writing business was no exception. As a full-time author, I faced the terrifying reality that my career, which I had spent years building, was on the brink of collapse. The usual strategies weren’t working, and I needed to adapt quickly or risk losing everything.

The Turning Point: Discovering the Power of Tropes

In the midst of this chaos, I embarked on an intense period of market research. I studied bestsellers, analyzed reader preferences, and identified trends that were consistently performing well. What I discovered was simple but powerful: tropes were not just popular—they were essential. Readers craved stories that hit familiar beats, with beloved themes and dynamics that they could dive into without hesitation.

Tropes are the building blocks of genre fiction. They are the recognizable themes, characters, and plot devices that create an immediate connection between the reader and the story. Think of them as the comfort food of literature—they’re satisfying, predictable in the best way, and leave readers craving more.

Why Tropes Are a Writer’s Best Friend

Tropes are incredibly useful when plotting a story. Like a well-constructed blurb, a trope gives you a clear roadmap to follow. It sets up expectations for the reader and provides a framework within which you can craft your narrative. Whether you’re a plotter or a pantser, having a trope in mind helps guide your story’s direction, ensuring it remains focused and engaging.

Using Tropes to Plot a Story

When I sat down to write my “Making It” series, I leaned heavily into popular tropes to create stories that were not only marketable but deeply resonated with readers. Take “Making It Forever,” for example. This novella is rich with the classic “rich guy/poor guy” trope, a favorite of mine.

Here’s the blurb:


“Being rich isn’t about the things we have, but about the love we share.”

In a world where wealth reigns supreme, Ezra Bennett, a former Olympian haunted by a career-ending injury, finds himself in the orbit of Gabriel Monroe—a billionaire influencer. While Gabriel basks in the glow of affluence and success, Ezra navigates the shadows, working as a janitor within Gabriel’s glittering empire.

Their lives couldn’t be further apart—Gabriel, a symbol of power and privilege, and Ezra, a man molded by adversity and the stark realities of poverty. Fate, however, orchestrates an unexpected convergence. As Ezra toils amidst Gabriel’s lavish world, an invisible thread weaves between them—a connection fueled by Ezra’s silent admiration, stark contrasts, and a shared understanding born from vastly different worlds colliding. Will Ezra and Gabriel defy the boundaries set by society’s hierarchy, or will the gaping divide between their lives extinguish the spark of their unlikely romance?

Making It Forever is a steamy story about two men, total opposites, who discover love is more important than anything else in the world. It’s the seventh book in the Making It series, and it may be read as a standalone story.

This story exemplifies how a strong trope can shape the entire narrative. The “rich guy/poor guy” dynamic is more than just a backdrop—it drives the characters’ interactions, their internal conflicts, and the story’s emotional stakes. Gabriel’s wealth and influence contrast sharply with Ezra’s struggles and resilience, creating a tension that keeps readers hooked.

My Favorite Tropes to Write About

  1. Second Chance Romance:
    • Why I Love It: There’s something inherently powerful about love that gets a second shot. The history and unresolved emotions between the characters make for deep, meaningful conflict and a satisfying resolution.
    • How I Use It: I start by crafting a rich backstory—why the characters broke up and what circumstances bring them back together. The tension comes from their shared past and the question of whether they can overcome it to find happiness again.
  2. Age Gap:
    • Why I Love It: The age difference introduces natural challenges and different life perspectives, making the relationship dynamic and often provocative.
    • How I Use It: I explore the characters’ internal and external conflicts, from societal judgments to personal insecurities. The contrast between youthful energy and mature wisdom can add layers of complexity to the romance.
  3. Boss/Employee:
    • Why I Love It: The inherent power imbalance and the forbidden nature of the relationship add instant drama and stakes.
    • How I Use It: This trope often involves navigating the thin line between professionalism and personal feelings. The tension comes from the characters’ need to maintain boundaries while their attraction grows.
  4. Rich Guy/Poor Guy:
    • Why I Love It: This trope plays with class differences and wealth disparity, often adding a ‘Cinderella’ element that readers find irresistible.
    • How I Use It: The story focuses on the challenges and misunderstandings that arise from differing lifestyles. The romance becomes a way to bridge these divides, showing that love can transcend societal barriers.

Conclusion: Tropes as Tools for Success

If there’s one thing I’ve learned from my experience, it’s that tropes are a writer’s best friend. They provide structure, guide your storytelling, and connect deeply with readers. Whether you’re looking to rescue a struggling writing career, like I did, or simply want to create stories that resonate, embracing tropes can lead you to success. So, the next time you sit down to outline your story, start with a trope—it just might be the key to unlocking your next bestseller.

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Mastering the Art of Writing a Book Blurb: My Step-by-Step Process

Writing a book blurb is one of the most daunting tasks for many authors—myself included when I first started out in publishing back in 2016. The thought of condensing an entire story into just a few short paragraphs was intimidating, to say the least. But after writing dozens of blurbs, I’ve refined a formula that works every time. In fact, I now write the blurb before I even begin outlining the story. Why? Because the blurb is the heart of your book; it tells you and your readers what the story is truly about.

Here’s how I do it:

1. Start with a Line of Dialogue

I always begin with a line of dialogue that captures the essence of the story. This line should be something that resonates with the core of the narrative and hints at the emotions or conflict that drive the plot. It’s your hook—the first impression that draws readers in.

Once I have that line, I place it in bold letters at the very top of the blurb. It’s a way of giving potential readers a taste of the voice and tone of the book right from the start.

2. Introduce the First Main Character

The next step is to write a paragraph from the perspective of one of the main characters. This paragraph should give readers insight into who this character is, what they want, and the challenges they’re facing. Focus on the emotional stakes and what’s driving this character forward. Make sure it’s engaging and leaves readers wanting to know more about this person’s journey.

3. Introduce the Second Main Character

After establishing the first MC, do the same for the second one. This paragraph should highlight their personality, their struggles, and how their path crosses with the first character’s. This creates a dynamic tension and sets up the relationship that will be central to the story. Remember, in romance, the chemistry between your characters is everything—let it shine through here.

4. Wrap It Up with a Teaser

The final paragraph is where you bring it all together. Summarize the main conflict or dilemma that these characters face, and leave the reader with a sense of anticipation. This is your last chance to entice them to pick up the book, so make it count. Use this space to tease the drama, the romance, the stakes—whatever makes your story unique and irresistible.

5. Keep It Short and Sweet

One of the biggest challenges in writing a blurb is keeping it concise. It’s tempting to include every subplot and nuance, but less is more. Focus on the main plot and the primary emotional arc. The goal is to give readers just enough to intrigue them, not to overwhelm them with details.

6. Remember the Tone

Match the tone of your blurb to the tone of your book. If it’s a lighthearted romance, let that playfulness come through. If it’s more intense, make sure your blurb reflects that. This helps set reader expectations and attracts the right audience for your story.


By following these steps, I’ve found that writing blurbs has gone from being something I dreaded to something I look forward to. It’s become an essential part of my writing process, giving me clarity on the story before I even begin outlining. If you’re an author who struggles with blurbs, give this formula a try. It might just make the whole process a little less daunting—and a lot more fun.

Here’s an example from my novella, Making It Fierce.

“Please, don’t look at me.”

Elijah Stevens once epitomized strength and valor. He spent 14 years of his life in the Marines, but an accident left him disfigured and ashamed. Returning to his hometown, he finds solace in the loving embrace of his grandmother. Frightened of being pitied, he struggles to find meaningful work, until his granny points out he has the voice of an angel.
Now Elijah is a successful audiobook narrator and voice actor. He’s made peace with his life in the shadows, until one day while narrating a romance novel, he realizes he’s never been lonelier in his life.

Lucas Crane hosts a popular radio show, and his soothing voice and sense of humor have earned him a devoted fan base. Lucas never lacks for male attention, but he’s never met a man who held his interest beyond three dates. That changes when he meets an extremely shy voice actor, who insists on recording a commercial in the dark. Intrigued by this mystery man, Lucas pursues him, but soon despairs of ever breaking through the sad man’s walls. Until one day, the barriers to Elijah’s heart begin to crumble.

Making It Fierce is a love story between a stubborn man afraid of his reflection in the mirror, and the bright, funny man who coaxes him out of the shadows. The authors love tropes, and here you’ll find opposites attract, a military man, hurt/comfort, and more.

Happy writing!

All About Daniel

Interviewer: Hi, Daniel! Thanks for taking some time out of your busy schedule to chat with us. For those who haven’t met you yet, could you tell us a little about yourself?

Daniel: Hola! Sure thing. My name’s Daniel Beltran, and I’m the head cook at Fireside Forge, the brewery my best friend Finn runs in Richmond. I’m originally from Guadalajara, but I’ve made Richmond my home for the past few years. I love being in the kitchen, experimenting with flavors, and creating dishes that make people feel good.

Interviewer: That sounds like a perfect fit for someone who’s a Cancer. How do you think your zodiac sign influences your personality?

Daniel: Oh, I’m definitely a Cancer through and through. I’m all about nurturing the people I care about, which is why I think I love cooking so much. It’s my way of taking care of others. But being a Cancer also means I feel things deeply—whether it’s love or loneliness, I experience it all in a big way. Sometimes that’s hard, but it’s also what makes me who I am.

Interviewer: Speaking of loneliness, you’ve been pretty open about your struggles with love. How has that been for you?

Daniel: Yeah, love hasn’t been the easiest for me. I’ve had my heart broken a few times, and it’s made me a little hesitant to put myself out there again. I guess I’ve always felt like I’m just waiting for the right person to come along, but so far, that hasn’t happened. It’s tough being in Richmond, away from my family and culture, especially when you don’t have someone special to share it with.

Interviewer: You’ve mentioned that you’re considering moving back to Mexico if things don’t change. What’s behind that decision?

Daniel: Richmond’s been good to me, but there’s a part of me that’s never stopped missing home. I’ve been feeling more and more like it might be time to go back. If I can’t find what I’m looking for here—a sense of belonging, love—then maybe it’s time to try somewhere else. Guadalajara is calling me back, and I’m seriously thinking about answering.

Interviewer: But before you pack your bags, there’s someone new in your life, right? Can you tell us about Max?

Daniel: (Smiles) Max… He’s something else. He’s this incredible food blogger who’s taken the culinary world by storm. We met when he came to Fireside Forge to write about the place, and there was just… something between us from the start. We connected in a way I hadn’t felt in a long time. It was exciting, like a spark I’d been missing. We fell hard and fast, but, well, there’s a twist in the story. Let’s just say not everything is as perfect as it seems.

Interviewer: That sounds intriguing! Without giving too much away, what can readers expect from Electric?

Daniel: They can expect a lot of passion, some intense moments, and maybe a few tears. My journey with Max isn’t an easy one, and there are definitely some obstacles we’ll have to face. But at its core, Electric is about finding love when you least expect it and deciding how far you’re willing to go to keep it. It’s a story of taking risks, which, for a Cancer like me, isn’t always easy, but it’s necessary if you want to find happiness.

Interviewer: We can’t wait to read more about your story in Electric! Before we wrap up, where can fans keep up with you online?

Daniel: You can find me on Instagram at @NowhereBoy. It’s where I share a bit of everything—my cooking, my thoughts, and sometimes just the little moments that make life interesting. I’d love to connect with everyone there.

Interviewer: Thanks so much for sharing with us, Daniel. We’re excited to see where your journey takes you next!

Daniel: Gracias! I hope everyone enjoys the ride. It’s going to be an unforgettable one.

Preorder your copy today from your favorite online bookstore. Electric, which is coming this October, is available at Amazon, Apple Books, Barnes & Noble, Google Play, Kobo, and Smashwords.

The Journey of Writing ‘Serve’: From Concept to Bestseller

I’m excited to share the journey of writing my second novel, ‘Serve,’ which holds a special place in my heart. As a huge tennis fan, drawing inspiration from my favorite players, Roger Federer and Carlos Alcaraz, was a dream come true. ‘Serve’ was a labor of love, born from my passion for the sport and my desire to tell a compelling MM romance story. Let’s dive into how this book came to life!

The Inspiration Behind ‘Serve’

‘Serve’ was my second novel, and it was a bit of a struggle to write as I was still learning the craft. Now, with over two dozen novels published, writing has become much easier. The main character, Tyler Florman, was inspired by none other than the legendary Roger Federer. His grace, talent, and poise on the court were qualities I wanted to imbue in Tyler. And, I have always had a huge crush on him.

The Blurb

Here’s a little taste of ‘Serve’:

No More Secrets

Everything Tennis champion Tyler Florman touches turns to gold. Winning is easy, but fame comes with a price. Living in the closet in exchange for riches and honors was second nature, until he met the younger man who conquered his heart.

Chip Carter has turned a childhood trauma into a career saving lives. As an EMT, he’s never found time for love, but all of that could be about to change when he rescues the famous, older athlete who steals his heart for the very first time.

Avoiding love is second nature for both men, until they meet that special someone worth fighting for. The odds against Chip and Tyler look insurmountable. But can Tyler leave the safety of the closet, and win Chip’s love at the same time?

Welcome to Hidden Creek, Texas, where the heart knows what it wants, and where true love lives happily ever after. Every Men of Hidden Creek novel can be read on its own, but keep an eye out for familiar faces around town! This book contains an eccentric blue-haired aunt, a spurned blackmailer, and a whole lot of balls.

The Struggle and Triumph

Writing ‘Serve’ was a challenging yet rewarding experience. I was still honing my skills as a writer, and every page felt like a new learning opportunity. There were moments of doubt and frustration, but my love for the characters and their story kept me going. Tyler and Chip’s journey from avoiding love to finding it in each other was a powerful narrative that I was determined to tell.

Learning the Craft

Over the years, with each novel I’ve written, my process has evolved. Writing has become more intuitive, and I’ve gained confidence in my storytelling abilities. ‘Serve’ was a pivotal moment in my career, teaching me the importance of perseverance and passion.

What’s Next?

I’m excited to continue exploring new stories and characters. Each book is a new adventure, and I can’t wait to share more with you all. Thank you for being a part of this journey with me! I’m currently working on the second book in the Burning Hearts series, Electric.

Stay tuned for more updates and behind-the-scenes looks into my upcoming projects. Your support and enthusiasm mean the world to me. To preorder Electric, click here and you’ll be taken to your favorite online bookstore.

Oh, and in case you were wondering, the novel Serve has a unique book cover on Amazon, since it was originally part of an exclusive Amazon series. To read Serve, you can purchase it from Apple Books, Google Play, Kobo, Barnes & Noble, Smashwords, and Amazon.

Understanding the “Gay Bear” Identity: Celebrating Body Positivity and Masculinity

When we talk about “bears” in the LGBTQ+ community, we’re not referring to the woodland creatures but rather a unique and vibrant subculture within the gay community. The term “gay bear” describes larger, often hairy gay men who embrace and celebrate body positivity and masculinity. Let’s delve into the origins, significance, and social impact of this identity.

Origins of the Bear Identity

The concept of the “bear” as a gay identity dates back to a 1979 article in The Advocate, a prominent LGBTQ+ magazine. This article categorized gay men based on their appearance, and from this, the bear identity began to take shape. Over the years, bears gained traction and evolved into a celebrated part of the LGBTQ+ community, representing a departure from stereotypical notions of male attractiveness.

Embracing Body Positivity

A core aspect of the bear identity is the celebration of body types that fall outside conventional standards of male beauty. Bears promote self-love and acceptance, encouraging individuals to embrace their natural bodies. This message of body positivity is crucial in a society that often pressures people to conform to unrealistic physical ideals. For me, this is my favorite thing about a cuddly bear. Not everyone is a skinny twink who you can barely recognize because of all the filters they use on social media posts. And FYI, I’m a bear admirer, not an actual bear. I’m too skinny, but I have been called an otter on multiple occasions! An otter is a thinner version of a hairy bear in case you were wondering.

Building a Strong Community

The bear community is known for its inclusivity and sense of belonging. There are bear-specific bars, clubs, social groups, and even annual events like bear Prides, where members of the community come together to celebrate their identity. These spaces provide a safe and welcoming environment for bears to express themselves and connect with others who share similar experiences and values.

Social Media Trends

On social media, the bear identity is often highlighted for its positive attributes, including:

  • Confidence: Bears are admired for their self-assuredness and comfort in their own skin. This confidence is seen as highly attractive and inspiring.
  • Masculinity: Bears challenge traditional beauty standards by representing a different kind of masculine appeal, one that values authenticity over conventional aesthetics.
  • Community: The strong sense of belonging and acceptance within the bear community is often showcased, emphasizing the supportive and tight-knit nature of this group.

It’s important to note that social media trends can sometimes be lighthearted and generalized. However, the core message remains clear: the bear community is a testament to the power of body positivity and the celebration of diverse forms of masculinity within the LGBTQ+ community.

Conclusion

The bear identity within the LGBTQ+ community is a powerful example of how diversity and acceptance can create a vibrant and supportive subculture. By embracing body positivity and redefining masculinity, bears challenge societal norms and inspire others to do the same. Whether through social media trends or real-life community events, the bear identity continues to make a significant impact, reminding us all of the importance of self-love and acceptance. Enjoy my first bear romance novel, Ignited, which is available at Amazon, Apple Books, Google Play Books, Kobo, Nook, and Smashwords. It’s also available at the Cruz Publishing bookstore, where I earn a higher royalty!

Beauty Within the Beast: A Timeless Tale of Transformation

Breathing New Life into Classic Tales: The Journey Behind “Making It Fierce”

When I sat down to write “Making It Fierce,” I knew I wanted to tap into the timeless magic of a story that has captivated hearts for generations: Beauty and the Beast. There’s something uniquely compelling about the transformative power of love, about two seemingly opposite individuals finding solace, strength, and passion in each other. This age-old tale served as the perfect inspiration for my novella, but with a fresh, modern twist that resonates with today’s readers.

Opposites Attract: Just like the Beast, Elijah Stevens is a character who hides from the world. Once a proud Marine, an accident left him physically and emotionally scarred. His journey is one of self-acceptance and finding the courage to step out of the shadows. Enter Lucas Crane, our modern-day Belle, whose bright spirit and unwavering curiosity set the stage for a romance that’s as healing as it is passionate.

Hurt/Comfort: A central theme in both stories is the delicate balance of hurt and comfort. Elijah’s tough exterior is a defense mechanism against a world he feels will only pity him. But Lucas, with his warmth and humor, slowly chips away at those defenses. Their love story is a testament to the healing power of genuine connection and understanding.

The Magic of Voice: Instead of enchanted roses and talking furniture, the magic in “Making It Fierce” lies in the characters’ voices. Elijah’s rich, soothing voice makes him a successful audiobook narrator, while Lucas’s engaging radio show personality draws people in. Their voices become a bridge, connecting them on a deep, emotional level long before they physically meet.

Breathing New Life into Classics: Reimagining a beloved classic like Beauty and the Beast into an LGBTQ romance was both exhilarating and challenging. The essence of the original—a love that sees beyond the surface—remains intact, but the journey and characters are crafted to reflect contemporary themes and diverse experiences. It’s a delicate dance of honoring the past while forging a path that feels fresh and relevant.

Writing “Making It Fierce” allowed me to explore the timeless themes of acceptance, transformation, and the power of love, but through a lens that speaks to today’s readers. It’s a reminder that even the oldest stories can find new life and meaning when viewed through a different perspective.

What’s Your Favorite Classic?

Now, I want to hear from you! Which classic stories do you think would make amazing LGBTQ romances? I’m always on the lookout for new inspiration and would love to hear your ideas. Email me at ianolewis@cruz-publishing.com and share your favorite tales. Let’s breathe new life into more beloved classics together!

Making It Fierce is currently on sale to celebrate pride month for only .99! You can purchase it on Amazon, Apple Books, Kobo, Google Play, Nook, and Smashwords. Or better yet, purchase it from the Cruz Publishing bookstore where I earn a higher royalty. To learn more about me, and my new releases, sign up for my weekly newsletter and you’ll get a complimentary naughty novelette, Justin’s Penance. It’s the tale of a priest struggling to keep his vows, and the manipulative college student who makes him break them.