As writers, we often focus on plot, character development, and dialogue, sometimes overlooking the subtle layers that add depth to our narratives. One of these layers is symbolism, a powerful tool that enriches our stories and resonates with readers on a deeper level.
Interestingly, many of us incorporate symbolism subconsciously, drawn to certain images or motifs without fully understanding their significance until later. This realization dawned on me recently, prompting a reflection on my own use of symbolism in my novels.
“Sergio, when the service is over, the bird man will release the doves from their cage. All you need to do is aim the camera toward them, flying into the sky.” I moved the camera arm to show him how to do it. “Can you handle that?”
“Yes, sir.” Sergio nodded gravely, then a smile split his face. “Congratulations.”
“Thanks.” I strolled up to the little stage and stepped up. Sofia beamed at me, then she cleared her throat. I turned around to see Ram coming out of the house.
“Sergio, hit the start button on the camera.” I said, then I felt like I was about to have a heart attack. Ram strode toward me, his strides full of confidence. His white tuxedo with the scarlet bowtie set off his dark looks perfectly.
“You are a dream come true,” I breathed. Ram was so handsome, so perfect in every way. I couldn’t believe that this was my husband-to-be.
He stepped onto the stage and stood next to me. We stared at each other, taking in the moment and all its significance. Ram took my hands in his own, squeezing them tightly as if to reassure himself that he wasn’t dreaming.
“Manolo,” he breathed, his gaze never leaving mine. “You are stunning.”
I felt my cheeks flush at his words and I smiled shyly back at him. He’d chosen an elegant black tux for me to wear, and I felt like I was in a classic movie from the 1950s.
“Gentlemen, are you ready?” Sofia asked, then I noticed the light. The sun was setting soon, and we had to get married now for the camera.
“Sergio, start filming.” I called over my shoulder. “Please, begin the service, Sofia.”
“No music?” She lifted a brow.
“No, I’ll edit some in before we post it on social media.” I shrugged, and Ram swallowed. “We don’t have to post it if you don’t want me to.”
“I want to shout it from the rooftops, Manolo.” Ram looked to the sky, then back at me. “Make this the best wedding video the world has ever seen.”
Sofia cleared her throat, then began the service. “Dearly beloved, we are gathered here today to celebrate the union of two souls, Ram and Manolo, in the sacred bond of marriage.” A crowd of people gathered around, mostly security guards and the other workers Hugo hired.
“Your love and commitment to each other have brought you to this beautiful moment, and it is an honor for me to officiate this ceremony.” Sofia’s brown eyes glittered. “Marriage is a journey of joy, growth, and unwavering support. It’s about sharing life’s triumphs and challenges, holding each other through laughter and tears.”
Ram sniffed, and I fought to keep my tears at bay.
“Today, you pledge your love to one another, promising to be true partners, friends, and companions in this life and beyond.” Sofia opened her hands and tilted her head. “Now, as a symbol of your unity, please exchange your vows.”
We’d only had a few minutes to write them down, and I hoped they sounded good on film.
“Manolo, you are my light, my rock, and my heart’s home. With you, I am complete. I promise to love you unconditionally, to stand by you through thick and thin, and to cherish every moment we share.” A tear slid down the side of Ram’s nose. “Go on, it’s your turn, Manolo.”
“Ram, you are my greatest blessing. You bring joy and laughter to my life every day. I promise to support you, to be your confidant and your partner, and to love you fiercely until the end of time.” My voice sounded so thick in my ears.
“In the presence of your loved ones and all those gathered here, do you, Ram, take Manolo to be your husband, to love and cherish him for all the days of your life?” Sofia nodded toward Ram.
“Yes, I will.”
“And do you, Manolo, take Ram to be your husband, to love and cherish him for all the days of your life?”
“Yes, always.” I felt hot tears pouring down my cheeks.
“By the power vested in me and the love that surrounds us, I now pronounce you husbands. You may seal your love with a kiss.” Sofia stepped back. Then Ram took my hands and pulled me into his arms.
“I love you now and forever, Manolo Castro.” Ram whispered, then his soft lips pressed against mine. This was our love, our truth, and I felt like my heart was about to burst inside my chest.
“¡Los pájaros, amigo, ¡suelta los pájaros!” I heard a man’s voice in the background ordering the birds to be released. A fluttering sound filled the air, and Ram and I stepped apart to see the sight.
“It’s so beautiful.” Ram sighed, throwing his arm over my shoulder. “Just like you.”
The doves circled the yard, their stunning white feathers glowing orange in the light of the setting sun.
“Oh no,” Ram pointed toward the edge of the yard. “The bandit birds are coming for them!”
“Poor things.” I shook my head as the grackles chased the doves away. Apparently, this was their territory, and no peace-loving doves were allowed. I heard a man laugh and realized it was Sergio, who was filming the whole thing. A few of the doves tried to land, but the grackles weren’t having it. This was their house, and they merely tolerated us. If the grackles had their way, we wouldn’t be here either.
“We now have the rest of our lives to look forward to.” Ram smiled, and the sky turned a pinkish purple as the sun set. “I love you so much, Manolo.”
“And I love you more.”
In this scene, the grackles assert their dominance over the doves, symbolizing the complex, often harsh reality of life in Mexico. The contrast between the peaceful doves and the assertive grackles reflects the dynamic, vibrant, and sometimes challenging nature of the country.
Symbolism can be a conscious choice or an intuitive one, but recognizing and embracing it can elevate our storytelling. It allows readers to connect with the narrative on a deeper level, finding meaning beyond the surface plot. Whether it’s a recurring image, a significant color, or an animal that represents a broader theme, symbolism enriches the reader’s experience and adds layers of complexity to our work.
As writers, we should remain open to the symbols that naturally emerge in our stories. They often hold the key to deeper insights and emotional resonance, making our narratives more compelling and memorable.
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Ian O. Lewis and Luke Jameson 