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Using Side Characters to Enrich Your Novel: A Look into Laura’s Story

In fiction, side characters often function as more than just background noise. Done well, they can add emotional depth, thematic resonance, and nuance to the main story. One way to accomplish this is through vignettes—short, evocative episodes that reveal a side character’s perspective, history, or inner life.

Take Laura, a dominatrix introduced in Money Shot, as an example. While she isn’t the protagonist, her chapter—detailing an evening that blends professional detachment, personal reflection, and emotional vulnerability—shows how vignettes can elevate a narrative. Let’s break down what her vignette adds to the story.

1. Humanizing a Professional Persona

In Laura’s scene, readers glimpse the duality of her life. Professionally, she’s confident, composed, and dominant, creating content for her FantasyFans platform. But as soon as the camera stops rolling, we see her as a layered individual—someone grappling with wistful memories and the gap between her dreams and reality.

This balance between strength and vulnerability doesn’t just make Laura relatable; it challenges stereotypes about her profession. Through Laura, readers are reminded that no one is defined solely by their job, and every character has a hidden complexity.

2. Reflecting Themes of the Main Story

Laura’s flashback to Seth—the man who shattered her youthful faith in love—echoes themes of disillusionment and second chances that permeate Money Shot. Her longing for something real and meaningful mirrors the struggles of the main characters, Liam and Jack, as they navigate their feelings in a complicated world.

By tying her personal heartbreak to broader themes, Laura’s vignette strengthens the emotional core of the novel, making her a narrative bridge between side plot and central story.

3. Introducing Subtle Plot Developments

The vignette also moves the plot forward in small but meaningful ways. When Laura stumbles upon a video of Liam and Jack, her reaction—shock at their chemistry and recognition of genuine love—foreshadows the emotional payoff in their relationship. As a seasoned observer in the adult content world, her perspective carries weight, validating what readers may already suspect: Liam and Jack aren’t just partners for the camera.

These subtle nods to the main plot keep the vignette relevant, ensuring it feels like a natural extension of the story rather than a detour.

4. Adding Texture to the Worldbuilding

By diving into Laura’s personal and professional lives, the vignette expands the world of Money Shot. Her experiences add texture to the broader community of creators, giving readers a sense of the diverse personalities and stories within the industry. This rich backdrop makes the story more immersive, as readers feel they’re stepping into a fully realized world.

5. Engaging Readers with Unique Voices

Laura’s voice—pragmatic yet tinged with longing—stands out. Her commentary on life, love, and work is sharp, insightful, and occasionally self-deprecating. This distinct voice keeps readers engaged, even when she’s not driving the main plot. It’s a reminder that side characters can shine as much as protagonists when given the chance.

Conclusion: More Than the Sum of Its Parts

Laura’s vignette demonstrates how side characters can contribute depth, complexity, and resonance to a story. By giving them space to reflect, connect, or react to events, you’re not just adding texture to your novel—you’re inviting readers to explore its emotional and thematic undercurrents in new and meaningful ways.

When crafting your next story, consider giving your side characters the spotlight for a moment. You might be surprised at how much they have to offer.

The Money Shot will be released this December.

Creating Side Characters Who Steal the Show: Meet Nessa Martinez from Money Shot

When I start a new story, side characters come to life almost as naturally as the main ones do. They add color, balance, and a deeper sense of reality to the world my protagonists inhabit. In Money Shot, my upcoming novel in the Boys On Film series, one character has really captured my imagination (and, I hope, will capture yours too): Vanessa “Nessa” Martinez.

Why Side Characters Matter

Side characters aren’t just there to fill space; they’re essential to making a story feel whole. They provide the friction, humor, and contrast that allow main characters to reveal hidden parts of themselves. Think of them as the characters who will say or do the things that the main characters wouldn’t—or couldn’t. They’re bold, unpredictable, and real. They also play another crucial role by grounding the story. In Money Shot, for instance, Liam and Jack’s emotional journey is intense and deeply personal, but it’s through Nessa’s eyes that the larger themes of friendship, loyalty, and love are often brought into focus.

Meet Nessa Martinez: The Heart of Money Shot

Nessa isn’t just any side character; she’s one of those people who steals the scene every time she appears. She’s the building manager for the upscale (yet slightly chaotic) New York apartment building where Liam and Jack live. Nessa has seen it all in her years on the job, and she isn’t shy about sharing her wisdom, whether it’s solicited or not. With a signature cherry-red bob, killer heels, and an unapologetically New York attitude, Nessa brings warmth, humor, and a touch of motherly interference to her relationships with Liam and Jack.

But Nessa’s importance goes beyond her quirky personality. She becomes a maternal figure to these young men, two friends grappling with financial strains, career setbacks, and complicated feelings for each other. Nessa is often the first to see what they’re blind to in themselves. She has a natural gift for reading people, and her intuition is spot-on when it comes to recognizing the spark between Liam and Jack—even before they’re ready to acknowledge it.

Comic Relief with a Purpose

One of my favorite things about writing Nessa was the freedom to let her be herself—funny, nosy, a little loud, and always with a clever comeback. Side characters like her provide an essential release valve in stories that tackle heavier themes. As Money Shot delves into Liam and Jack’s complicated relationship, Nessa’s moments of comic relief keep the tone balanced. And her insights, often wrapped in humor, help them see the humor in their own situations and not take themselves too seriously.

The Side Characters Who Stay with Us

Ultimately, side characters like Nessa are about connection. We may not always remember every detail about a story’s plot, but the side characters who make us laugh, cringe, or feel seen often stay with us the longest. In Money Shot, Nessa’s larger-than-life personality and unfiltered love for her “boys” add layers to the story, turning moments of vulnerability into ones of strength and making the romance richer and more real.

So when you dive into Money Shot, I hope you’ll fall for Liam and Jack’s love story—and that you’ll find a little piece of yourself in Nessa’s fierce loyalty, humor, and unbreakable spirit. Side characters may not be in the spotlight, but for me, they’re as essential to the story as the main characters are. I can’t wait for you to meet Nessa and experience all the ways she keeps Liam and Jack on their toes! Money Shot is a gay romantic comedy and is releasing this December.

Embracing the Tropes: How I Rescued My Writing Business and Found Joy in Trope-Driven Romance

In 2020, the world was in turmoil. The U.S. election was one of the most contentious in history, and the pandemic added a layer of uncertainty to almost every aspect of life. My writing business was no exception. As a full-time author, I faced the terrifying reality that my career, which I had spent years building, was on the brink of collapse. The usual strategies weren’t working, and I needed to adapt quickly or risk losing everything.

The Turning Point: Discovering the Power of Tropes

In the midst of this chaos, I embarked on an intense period of market research. I studied bestsellers, analyzed reader preferences, and identified trends that were consistently performing well. What I discovered was simple but powerful: tropes were not just popular—they were essential. Readers craved stories that hit familiar beats, with beloved themes and dynamics that they could dive into without hesitation.

Tropes are the building blocks of genre fiction. They are the recognizable themes, characters, and plot devices that create an immediate connection between the reader and the story. Think of them as the comfort food of literature—they’re satisfying, predictable in the best way, and leave readers craving more.

Why Tropes Are a Writer’s Best Friend

Tropes are incredibly useful when plotting a story. Like a well-constructed blurb, a trope gives you a clear roadmap to follow. It sets up expectations for the reader and provides a framework within which you can craft your narrative. Whether you’re a plotter or a pantser, having a trope in mind helps guide your story’s direction, ensuring it remains focused and engaging.

Using Tropes to Plot a Story

When I sat down to write my “Making It” series, I leaned heavily into popular tropes to create stories that were not only marketable but deeply resonated with readers. Take “Making It Forever,” for example. This novella is rich with the classic “rich guy/poor guy” trope, a favorite of mine.

Here’s the blurb:

“Being rich isn’t about the things we have, but about the love we share.”

In a world where wealth reigns supreme, Ezra Bennett, a former Olympian haunted by a career-ending injury, finds himself in the orbit of Gabriel Monroe—a billionaire influencer. While Gabriel basks in the glow of affluence and success, Ezra navigates the shadows, working as a janitor within Gabriel’s glittering empire.

Their lives couldn’t be further apart—Gabriel, a symbol of power and privilege, and Ezra, a man molded by adversity and the stark realities of poverty. Fate, however, orchestrates an unexpected convergence. As Ezra toils amidst Gabriel’s lavish world, an invisible thread weaves between them—a connection fueled by Ezra’s silent admiration, stark contrasts, and a shared understanding born from vastly different worlds colliding. Will Ezra and Gabriel defy the boundaries set by society’s hierarchy, or will the gaping divide between their lives extinguish the spark of their unlikely romance?

Making It Forever is a steamy story about two men, total opposites, who discover love is more important than anything else in the world. It’s the seventh book in the Making It series, and it may be read as a standalone story.

This story exemplifies how a strong trope can shape the entire narrative. The “rich guy/poor guy” dynamic is more than just a backdrop—it drives the characters’ interactions, their internal conflicts, and the story’s emotional stakes. Gabriel’s wealth and influence contrast sharply with Ezra’s struggles and resilience, creating a tension that keeps readers hooked.

My Favorite Tropes to Write About

  1. Second Chance Romance:
    • Why I Love It: There’s something inherently powerful about love that gets a second shot. The history and unresolved emotions between the characters make for deep, meaningful conflict and a satisfying resolution.
    • How I Use It: I start by crafting a rich backstory—why the characters broke up and what circumstances bring them back together. The tension comes from their shared past and the question of whether they can overcome it to find happiness again.
  2. Age Gap:
    • Why I Love It: The age difference introduces natural challenges and different life perspectives, making the relationship dynamic and often provocative.
    • How I Use It: I explore the characters’ internal and external conflicts, from societal judgments to personal insecurities. The contrast between youthful energy and mature wisdom can add layers of complexity to the romance.
  3. Boss/Employee:
    • Why I Love It: The inherent power imbalance and the forbidden nature of the relationship add instant drama and stakes.
    • How I Use It: This trope often involves navigating the thin line between professionalism and personal feelings. The tension comes from the characters’ need to maintain boundaries while their attraction grows.
  4. Rich Guy/Poor Guy:
    • Why I Love It: This trope plays with class differences and wealth disparity, often adding a ‘Cinderella’ element that readers find irresistible.
    • How I Use It: The story focuses on the challenges and misunderstandings that arise from differing lifestyles. The romance becomes a way to bridge these divides, showing that love can transcend societal barriers.

Conclusion: Tropes as Tools for Success

If there’s one thing I’ve learned from my experience, it’s that tropes are a writer’s best friend. They provide structure, guide your storytelling, and connect deeply with readers. Whether you’re looking to rescue a struggling writing career, like I did, or simply want to create stories that resonate, embracing tropes can lead you to success. So, the next time you sit down to outline your story, start with a trope—it just might be the key to unlocking your next bestseller.

Exciting news! The entire Making It series is currently on sale for just .99 each! This is the perfect opportunity to dive into these trope-driven novellas and see firsthand how I weave classic romance themes into engaging, emotional stories. Whether you’re a reader who loves a good love story or a writer looking to do some market research, this sale is an excellent chance to explore how tropes can create compelling narratives. Don’t miss out—grab your copies today and enjoy the journey through the Making It series! The buttons below will take you to your favorite stores!

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Mastering the Art of Writing a Book Blurb: My Step-by-Step Process

Writing a book blurb is one of the most daunting tasks for many authors—myself included when I first started out in publishing back in 2016. The thought of condensing an entire story into just a few short paragraphs was intimidating, to say the least. But after writing dozens of blurbs, I’ve refined a formula that works every time. In fact, I now write the blurb before I even begin outlining the story. Why? Because the blurb is the heart of your book; it tells you and your readers what the story is truly about.

Here’s how I do it:

1. Start with a Line of Dialogue

I always begin with a line of dialogue that captures the essence of the story. This line should be something that resonates with the core of the narrative and hints at the emotions or conflict that drive the plot. It’s your hook—the first impression that draws readers in.

Once I have that line, I place it in bold letters at the very top of the blurb. It’s a way of giving potential readers a taste of the voice and tone of the book right from the start.

2. Introduce the First Main Character

The next step is to write a paragraph from the perspective of one of the main characters. This paragraph should give readers insight into who this character is, what they want, and the challenges they’re facing. Focus on the emotional stakes and what’s driving this character forward. Make sure it’s engaging and leaves readers wanting to know more about this person’s journey.

3. Introduce the Second Main Character

After establishing the first MC, do the same for the second one. This paragraph should highlight their personality, their struggles, and how their path crosses with the first character’s. This creates a dynamic tension and sets up the relationship that will be central to the story. Remember, in romance, the chemistry between your characters is everything—let it shine through here.

4. Wrap It Up with a Teaser

The final paragraph is where you bring it all together. Summarize the main conflict or dilemma that these characters face, and leave the reader with a sense of anticipation. This is your last chance to entice them to pick up the book, so make it count. Use this space to tease the drama, the romance, the stakes—whatever makes your story unique and irresistible.

5. Keep It Short and Sweet

One of the biggest challenges in writing a blurb is keeping it concise. It’s tempting to include every subplot and nuance, but less is more. Focus on the main plot and the primary emotional arc. The goal is to give readers just enough to intrigue them, not to overwhelm them with details.

6. Remember the Tone

Match the tone of your blurb to the tone of your book. If it’s a lighthearted romance, let that playfulness come through. If it’s more intense, make sure your blurb reflects that. This helps set reader expectations and attracts the right audience for your story.

By following these steps, I’ve found that writing blurbs has gone from being something I dreaded to something I look forward to. It’s become an essential part of my writing process, giving me clarity on the story before I even begin outlining. If you’re an author who struggles with blurbs, give this formula a try. It might just make the whole process a little less daunting—and a lot more fun.

Here’s an example from my novella, Making It Fierce.

“Please, don’t look at me.”

Elijah Stevens once epitomized strength and valor. He spent 14 years of his life in the Marines, but an accident left him disfigured and ashamed. Returning to his hometown, he finds solace in the loving embrace of his grandmother. Frightened of being pitied, he struggles to find meaningful work, until his granny points out he has the voice of an angel.
Now Elijah is a successful audiobook narrator and voice actor. He’s made peace with his life in the shadows, until one day while narrating a romance novel, he realizes he’s never been lonelier in his life.

Lucas Crane hosts a popular radio show, and his soothing voice and sense of humor have earned him a devoted fan base. Lucas never lacks for male attention, but he’s never met a man who held his interest beyond three dates. That changes when he meets an extremely shy voice actor, who insists on recording a commercial in the dark. Intrigued by this mystery man, Lucas pursues him, but soon despairs of ever breaking through the sad man’s walls. Until one day, the barriers to Elijah’s heart begin to crumble.

Making It Fierce is a love story between a stubborn man afraid of his reflection in the mirror, and the bright, funny man who coaxes him out of the shadows. The authors love tropes, and here you’ll find opposites attract, a military man, hurt/comfort, and more.

Happy writing!

Using Current Events to Enrich Fiction

In the ever-evolving landscape of literature, incorporating current events into fiction offers a unique way to enrich storytelling. It allows authors to create narratives that resonate deeply with readers by weaving in elements of the world they live in. In this post, I’ll explore why and how current events can enhance fiction, using my upcoming novel Breaking The Ice by my pen name Tessa Vidal as a case study.

Why Incorporate Current Events?

Integrating current events into fiction isn’t just about mirroring reality; it’s about creating stories that feel immediate and relevant. By grounding your narrative in real-world events, you can engage readers on a more profound level, sparking conversations and connections that go beyond the page.

Be Careful!

The one real drawback to incorporating current events into a story is you end up dating yourself, which can shorten the shelf-life of your book. Because of this you should always be careful to pick current events that are also evergreen topics. For example, in my current work in progress I’m using a political setting without engaging in specific events that happened in real life. Politics is evergreen, meaning it’s almost always current, but if I wrote about the actual election of 2024 between Kamala Harris and Donald Trump, the book would be dated almost immediately after the conclusion of the presidential race.

Balancing Accuracy and Creativity

While using current events can add depth to your story, it’s crucial to balance accuracy with creativity. Extensive research is essential to ensure a respectful and accurate portrayal. However, fiction allows for flexibility—use real events as a backdrop while crafting fictional elements to suit your narrative.

Crafting Characters and Plotlines

Current events can significantly influence character development and plot progression. Characters’ reactions to these events can reflect real-world perspectives and add layers of authenticity to their motivations and conflicts. For example, in Breaking The Ice, the fictional “Vision 2025 Coalition” is inspired by Project 2025, highlighting the tensions surrounding environmental policies. The antagonist, Victor Blackwood, embodies the morally ambiguous tactics often seen in contemporary politics, drawing loose inspiration from figures like Roger Stone.

Case Study: Breaking The Ice

In Breaking The Ice, the “Vision 2025 Coalition” is a critical plot device. This fictional organization is modeled after Project 2025, a real-world initiative with controversial implications. By adapting this concept, I’ve created a compelling antagonist, Victor Blackwood, whose lobbying efforts for off-shore drilling present a formidable challenge for the protagonist, Representative Ellie Thompson.

Victor’s character is loosely based on Donald Trump ally Roger Stone, reflecting the cunning and controversial nature of some political figures. His blackmail tactics—using Ellie’s secret as leverage—introduce a moral dilemma that deepens the story’s conflict. This approach not only provides a gripping narrative but also mirrors real-world political drama, enhancing the story’s relevance and impact.

Enhancing Reader Engagement

By incorporating current events, you invite readers to engage with your story on a personal level. It stimulates discussion and encourages readers to reflect on contemporary issues through the lens of fiction. This connection can make your story more impactful and memorable.

Conclusion

Incorporating current events into fiction offers a powerful tool for creating engaging, relevant, and thought-provoking narratives. By blending real-world elements with creative storytelling, you can craft stories that resonate deeply with readers and spark meaningful conversations. I encourage fellow writers to explore this approach, balancing creativity with reality to enhance their storytelling.

Have you used current events in your writing? If you’re not a writer, are you ever drawn to books about current events? If so, share your experience in the comments below. Happy Reading!

Breaking The Ice is now available for preorder exclusively on Amazon.

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The Unseen Layers of Writing: Embracing Symbolism in Storytelling

As writers, we often focus on plot, character development, and dialogue, sometimes overlooking the subtle layers that add depth to our narratives. One of these layers is symbolism, a powerful tool that enriches our stories and resonates with readers on a deeper level.

Interestingly, many of us incorporate symbolism subconsciously, drawn to certain images or motifs without fully understanding their significance until later. This realization dawned on me recently, prompting a reflection on my own use of symbolism in my novels.

Symbolism in “The Big Day”

In my novel The Big Day, I used grackles as a symbol of Mexico, embodying both the beauty and the challenges of the country. The grackles, often seen as common and even troublesome birds, represent the resilient spirit and vibrant life of Mexico. Here’s a snippet from the final chapter that demonstrates this symbolism:

“Sergio, when the service is over, the bird man will release the doves from their cage. All you need to do is aim the camera toward them, flying into the sky.” I moved the camera arm to show him how to do it. “Can you handle that?”

“Yes, sir.” Sergio nodded gravely, then a smile split his face. “Congratulations.”

“Thanks.” I strolled up to the little stage and stepped up. Sofia beamed at me, then she cleared her throat. I turned around to see Ram coming out of the house.

“Sergio, hit the start button on the camera.” I said, then I felt like I was about to have a heart attack. Ram strode toward me, his strides full of confidence. His white tuxedo with the scarlet bowtie set off his dark looks perfectly.

“You are a dream come true,” I breathed. Ram was so handsome, so perfect in every way. I couldn’t believe that this was my husband-to-be.

He stepped onto the stage and stood next to me. We stared at each other, taking in the moment and all its significance. Ram took my hands in his own, squeezing them tightly as if to reassure himself that he wasn’t dreaming.

“Manolo,” he breathed, his gaze never leaving mine. “You are stunning.”

I felt my cheeks flush at his words and I smiled shyly back at him. He’d chosen an elegant black tux for me to wear, and I felt like I was in a classic movie from the 1950s.

“Gentlemen, are you ready?” Sofia asked, then I noticed the light. The sun was setting soon, and we had to get married now for the camera.

“Sergio, start filming.” I called over my shoulder. “Please, begin the service, Sofia.”

“No music?” She lifted a brow.

“No, I’ll edit some in before we post it on social media.” I shrugged, and Ram swallowed. “We don’t have to post it if you don’t want me to.”

“I want to shout it from the rooftops, Manolo.” Ram looked to the sky, then back at me. “Make this the best wedding video the world has ever seen.”

Sofia cleared her throat, then began the service. “Dearly beloved, we are gathered here today to celebrate the union of two souls, Ram and Manolo, in the sacred bond of marriage.” A crowd of people gathered around, mostly security guards and the other workers Hugo hired.

“Your love and commitment to each other have brought you to this beautiful moment, and it is an honor for me to officiate this ceremony.” Sofia’s brown eyes glittered. “Marriage is a journey of joy, growth, and unwavering support. It’s about sharing life’s triumphs and challenges, holding each other through laughter and tears.”

Ram sniffed, and I fought to keep my tears at bay.

“Today, you pledge your love to one another, promising to be true partners, friends, and companions in this life and beyond.” Sofia opened her hands and tilted her head. “Now, as a symbol of your unity, please exchange your vows.”

We’d only had a few minutes to write them down, and I hoped they sounded good on film.

“Manolo, you are my light, my rock, and my heart’s home. With you, I am complete. I promise to love you unconditionally, to stand by you through thick and thin, and to cherish every moment we share.” A tear slid down the side of Ram’s nose. “Go on, it’s your turn, Manolo.”

“Ram, you are my greatest blessing. You bring joy and laughter to my life every day. I promise to support you, to be your confidant and your partner, and to love you fiercely until the end of time.” My voice sounded so thick in my ears.

“In the presence of your loved ones and all those gathered here, do you, Ram, take Manolo to be your husband, to love and cherish him for all the days of your life?” Sofia nodded toward Ram.

“Yes, I will.”

“And do you, Manolo, take Ram to be your husband, to love and cherish him for all the days of your life?”

“Yes, always.” I felt hot tears pouring down my cheeks.

“By the power vested in me and the love that surrounds us, I now pronounce you husbands. You may seal your love with a kiss.” Sofia stepped back. Then Ram took my hands and pulled me into his arms.

“I love you now and forever, Manolo Castro.” Ram whispered, then his soft lips pressed against mine. This was our love, our truth, and I felt like my heart was about to burst inside my chest.

“¡Los pájaros, amigo, ¡suelta los pájaros!” I heard a man’s voice in the background ordering the birds to be released. A fluttering sound filled the air, and Ram and I stepped apart to see the sight.

“It’s so beautiful.” Ram sighed, throwing his arm over my shoulder. “Just like you.”

The doves circled the yard, their stunning white feathers glowing orange in the light of the setting sun.

“Oh no,” Ram pointed toward the edge of the yard. “The bandit birds are coming for them!”

“Poor things.” I shook my head as the grackles chased the doves away. Apparently, this was their territory, and no peace-loving doves were allowed. I heard a man laugh and realized it was Sergio, who was filming the whole thing. A few of the doves tried to land, but the grackles weren’t having it. This was their house, and they merely tolerated us. If the grackles had their way, we wouldn’t be here either.

“We now have the rest of our lives to look forward to.” Ram smiled, and the sky turned a pinkish purple as the sun set. “I love you so much, Manolo.”

“And I love you more.”

In this scene, the grackles assert their dominance over the doves, symbolizing the complex, often harsh reality of life in Mexico. The contrast between the peaceful doves and the assertive grackles reflects the dynamic, vibrant, and sometimes challenging nature of the country.

Embracing Symbolism in Writing

Symbolism can be a conscious choice or an intuitive one, but recognizing and embracing it can elevate our storytelling. It allows readers to connect with the narrative on a deeper level, finding meaning beyond the surface plot. Whether it’s a recurring image, a significant color, or an animal that represents a broader theme, symbolism enriches the reader’s experience and adds layers of complexity to our work.

As writers, we should remain open to the symbols that naturally emerge in our stories. They often hold the key to deeper insights and emotional resonance, making our narratives more compelling and memorable.

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